Wiki Comments

The history of women in hip hop (Wikipedia)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TMcduffie1990/The_History_of_Women_in_Hip_Hop

Taniqua

I thought it was good how you went from the history of women in hip hop to today’s world. It was very informative and well-written. You also use some strong sources that add details. The page is organized and nicely put together. The only criticism I have about it is the fact that you could have used actual headers instead of putting them in bold. It would have automatically created a table of contents. It is still nice and well worth the read.

Molinaro’s Ristorante (Buf Wiki)

http://buffalo.wikispot.org/Molinaro%27s_Ristorante

Devon

This page is very appealing to the eye. I like all of the different photos you included rather than just huge chunks of text. I think you cover everything somebody would want to know about Molinaro’s. It is very well-written and I like the Italian colors you include at the top of the page. Nice job, Devon.

http://buffalo.wikispot.org/Urban_Gardens (Buf Wiki)

A very organized and nicely put together page. There are a ton of sources used, making this very informational and worth the read. I think you expanded well on each category. I like that you used a few photos because they illustrate what you are stating in the paragraphs.

How to Cook Chicken Riggies

http://www.wikihow.com/Cook-Chicken-Riggies (Wiki How)

This looks very nice and sounds pretty good, too. You give a solid background and your lists are well done. It’s a how-to list, so I don’t have much to say about it. It looks to me that someone who follows this list would have no problem cooking the meal.

Bunmi Akinyemiju (Wikipedia)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bunmi_Akinyemiju

This is a well-written wikipedia page about a guy’s name who I will never be able to pronounce. You go into great detail about different aspects of his life and career. This is a page that tells me exactly who Bunmi is and I am surprised to see how much he has done already!